http://rayaso.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] rayaso.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] flipflop_diva 2017-04-12 09:04 pm (UTC)

What a wonderful story, with a great end! You set this up perfectly for some kind of horror story, and wound up with a band initiation. I loved all the little details and the mounting suspense. Well done!

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